User blog:Polyhedron69/Analysis of Void Viper

Let's examine Isloted Europe...Shall We?

Disclaimer: I know stories don't have to be realistic, but that doesn't mean your story has to be shit

So episode 0 starts off with Europe being isolated, should be a simple plot, like what are countries gonna do

We see movements rise up, Noocracy, starts off well, but in later episodes void completely rapes it

First major problem, so Void lays all these things out, Sea Spirits, Sea Monster, Missing Ships, and he completely ditches all of that, like what the fuck, he gives no fucking explanation of what they are

Even in the second tk kast episode he references Sea Spirits, once again no explanation

Like what the fuck, I know he stated he dropped alot of ideas out, which is fucking gay

Anyways simple as that Void shows alot of things, and just fucking cuts them

Complaint 2

The final episode is fucking gay, literally just talking, which should sound fine but it's super retarded

First off it gives this message about life, like what the fuck where this come from, it be fine but it wasn't established at the start really, like maybe talk about a deep connection with families or country relationships and how there sad about other countries gone, he does with Noocracy but vaguely, he just shows people rising up then they collapse, nothing is explored in there hardship of losing there family nothing

Secondly at the end it shows something called the storm of grief, which once again is someting about death, but what the fuck is it? A storm, so creature I don't fucking know, I assume it's like a rain storm, or something but why does it appear? Because of.... death? Nature? He doesn't fucking explain, and he does this alot throughout his series he he doesn't fucking explain what's going on, he stated in Tides of the Hybrid he wanted people to theorize, well I can theorize a fpwhole fucking alot

So then the storm engulfs Europe, and all the while countries are talking about nature will one day consume us, be happy, live life, like what date fuck is this coming from, the tone from episodes changes drastically, we go from fighting plant creatures to talking about life

Yeah I know the whole theme is about 5 stages of grief, but we go from action to this

It's so bizarre, maybe I'm missing something but I just think that's very poorly unplanned writing

Complaint 3 Macedonia

Where do start...first off this character confuses me so fucking much

So in Earlier episodes we see him like being sneaky, talking about history is written by victors, killing people

Ok cool, maybe he had something to do with the sea spirits, or ocean creature

So take that in mind, hen jump to episode 14, where he starts talking about Nature will one day consume us

Like what the fuck? So all those weird moments of him planning are not explained

We literally have no fucking explanation to why he did what he did, secondly why is he talking about life, he never did this before

It's like a completely different character

It's like Void compteley shifted the entire feel of the story mid way through

I just...I just don't fucking get it, like Void

PLEASE EXPLAIN WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON AND STOP SWITCHING SO MANY THINGS AROUND THAT ARE ESSENTIAL TO THE PLOT

also in the description he wanted to focus on story based things

Well Void please stop making shitty stories

Make something good, and don't just masturbate all over it

People in the comments are saying: good story,  best mapper, awesome, so sad

I cant think of a good story when, Nothing is explained, strange character development, and complete change of tone

Maybe he's not a good story explained, but for the love of god, try...try...to fucking explain shit and figure out a story and quit making so many goddamn plot changes