Talk:Mapper Tournament 3/@comment-26865094-20170124190502/@comment-26047466-20170125064752

@Voidviper

if unrealistic isn't enough how about outright stupid

allright so here's a recap since matt the welsh man told me i "hated on you"

To start off the video Guatemala instantly speaks, flaw : it isn't that hard to have a couple seconds to look arround, then it introduces the plot ridicously by saying " are you okay wow are you dying? " and the other guy talks a load of shit saying on how yes he IS dying or some stupid bullshit. Not explained, Mexico collapses shortly after for no explained reason whatsoever (Take in account this is all on 2017!)

All of central america notices on how mexico dies and tries to help them, but it's already " too late ", feels like a huge plot hole on that one or a big time flaw since everything seems to happen in about a week by now, and America doesn't react even AFTER the fact, which is dumb.

Also, did i mention Cascadia breaks away in 2017 for no reason or context whatsoever?, haha yeah. the fuck. Then America complains on how they beat him without fighting? It's like a stupid AI in a game, only that this shouldn't happen in any context, unless the world is the dumbest place in the world, judging by realism, how the fuck does america lose it's power base in less than a year?;Also, Finance? i doubt any financing would help in a weaponless revolution, if that makes any sense at all.

By this point im already getting sick of this shit only 1:24 minutes in, as Canada shows themselves as retarded as everyone else.

OH HEY WHAT ELSE HAPPENS IN 2017, the US collapses too, and Quebec also- the fuck how does shit happen so fast?

Then suddenly every american state is able to fight wars in the same year they declared independence, yeah, what. Then a filler war, " Canada is evil ", Dakota gets obliberated for no reason and doesn't contribute to the story at all because they're just being a bunch of pansies. Then a super "Ilvorica " is born and nearly reunifies the US, what was the point of breaking away then? for fucks sakes. Also alliances are formed with no context reason or development to them, so that's that.

Also, Ilvorica is tried to be portrayed as a villain or as an anti hero for that matter but fails terribly and falls into the cliché category, not to mention the awful ion ripoff at the very end; i'll get to that later!

Also, 2017, Ilvorica invades Quebec, how fast do wars happen in here? Why the fuck is Ilvorica attacking anyone, what's their goal, what's their anything at all? it doesn't make any sense, JUST WHY?

And then the lame attempt for character development with " Los Puntos " and " Los Angeles " that brings up a fairly good point but overall just wastes time.

And now the last 40 seconds of the video which mark you should not watch this at all

Cascadia and Alaska have a nonsense talk on, what is it? Protection? no really i can't figure that out.

Then Alaska turns Graxum and the video ends with a circle transition

Over that, summarized.

The character development is lame

This is so unrealistic it hurts balls

The time frame is so ridiculous that it ALSO hurts balls

The episode is too " cryptic " as you say, and doesn't motivate anyone to watch the next episode, as the cliffhanger is lacking in essence and introduced in the last 40 seconds

You need to work a lot. and by a lot, a hell lot. Keep trying, someday you'll get it, mapping, or anything else for that matter, has a learning curve, and getting a style that is enjoyable and makes sense is the one that racks up the most quality-enjoying people, either that or spam romanian-like content.

-Fedex